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this story actually has been bothering me this week... all because of the darn song :XD:

This is exactly how i picture the Music Video to look like, btw ;)

anyway, hopefully this is one of my unpredictable-ending stories ;P i've been trying to work on stories like that because it's just not fun when things are predictable, is it? 8-)

most likely you know what the story about, just from the title... :)
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Once again, a splendid piece of work. There are only a few mistakes to be seen on this piece of literature. Don't use 'I' at the beginning of a sentence each time. If it helps, try describing the room, smell, touch... etc. Before using the word 'I' again. For example: ' I kissed her cheek and her neck as she moaned. ' would be, 'My wet lips press against her plump cheeks, her heavy sighs causing tingles in my ear as we both relish our inestimable moment together. ' Overall, a very good piece of work. I love how Tom is all mischievous. ; u ;